Sunday, 5 February 2017

503 - Papyrus Brief - Finalisation



Final crit 
- I added the required space for my summarising paragraph (on the focus of my piece and how it makes me calm) at the bottom right.
- But I was unsure about this, so with my submission I requested some feedback regarding any changes that may be necessary to paragraph bottom right.




- The representation of the scene is overall very professional
- Each little consideration for the target audience developed the concept - empty hut for personalisation, same goes for the beach - so each colourer can depict and adapt their summer dream too
- The repeat pattern allows for each colourer to have their unique experimentation with the geometrics and what surrounds and ties in to the centre piece.
- Did have a comment about the un-consistent spaces between the lines of each hexagon, but I justified this imperfection as adding to the strange satisfaction and intricate way that they fit together - makes your eye be drawn to it and examine it more. Aids the psychology behind how colouring relieves stress and anxiety through the fixation (meditational properties) which comes with the task of colouring.


Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed this project as it gave my design the opportunity to actually impact someones life for the better. I feel like I was very considered with my final approach to the illustration allowing the colourer to develop on what I left blank for them. 
I hope the combination of a relaxed summer mindset with the trippy repeat patterns effectively satisfies what the brief was looking for and my design gets published.

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